Lollipop girl!
I was leaning right in front of her over a pole, air in between really separated us. I feel really glad to write about my dear Ms. Lollipop.
I never watched you blurting, screaming, or laughing on the day you were licking your lollipop with a little smile. I have seen so many kids licking lollipop but what I witnessed it now after 23 years of my existence in this planet, it is a visual treat.
On my first sight you were a girl with loads of attitude other than a lollipop in your possession and I thought you were a big time show off!! I had many things in my bag of opinions. I used to see you almost daily at the railway station but still wouldn’t talk to you and after three days of same monotonous reactions from your side, I just walked towards you. Even then things didn’t go well. I hope you can understand what I’ve meant Lolly! I’ll also never forget that. Both of us didn’t have good opinion on each other, not even a kind of pretty good as, I was constantly interrupting you while you were infesting your cheeks with the saliva laden lollipop that you licked for hours or at least you seem that way. You didn’t want me to be around you I guess. Our opinions were taunting our own brain or at least it happened for me [:D]. A week went by and the happenings ticked the clock faster. One fine day I was standing in formals as always, I came to know something from the mystical smile of yours which would literally blow off million candles if they were around. You came into realization that I was not all ‘THAT’ bad… Umm!
So many sweet, sexy, beautiful, ugly girls go past me in the railway station. But you were a debonair of a class, relatively calm, and gentle. The SWEETEST girl with the mystical eyes who pierces my heart every night.
I once thought I would make you realize one day that I am worth every bit for you. It shouldn’t just be the “happy go lucky” nature, we saw each other every day but I don’t know whether your stunningly sculptured sexy figure stays in my mind and the haunting eyes of yours Ahh! God! Just can’t imagine. So, I decided to take a snap of yours and I did that with ease as I had a Tele lens.
One day I came with all the glee on my face to see you but that morning everything changed I was not able to see you and I heard from someone that you won’t be here…. As long as the minute hand and hour hand in the clock ticks, as long as sun rises and sets, changes happen.
People change their boarding point, as their destination change. I hope I see you some day. But some bonds last forever.
I won’t be able to see you in the railway station again as the advertisement board have been removed.
phew!!!!!!!!! u have written something about a stupid gal licking a lolly lop….u wasted ur time seeing her and i wasted my time reading this…i thought it would be something else…U are just one common guy!!!!Bored…………When will i ever see a guy like mounam pesiyadhey surya and a guy like azhagiya theeye prassana(only can see those kinda genuine ones in the movies:P:P;))…ha ha ha ha! awaiting it…but generally to comment ur write was neat based on what u wrote ..might be i hated the topic u chose but what ever u write u write it to its best man!!! cheers write something i would love to read
Smile all the way..
swapna.v
Cool stuff.Well written..
I was like trying to recollect, who could this lolly-dolly be!!
man that was funny, nice twist in the end, which railway station was it btw?
@swapna : ye funny female. . . Try to read the post fully. @anuraag : mambalam
You just proved your calibre mate! That was a beautiful piece of essay. People would have read it, a few would have stopped in the initial few lines, thanks to our perverted minds. Few others would have gone deep down the lollypop and then say there was a brilliant twist in the end. But “I was constantly interrupting you while you were infesting your cheeks with the saliva laden lollipop that you licked for hours or at least you seem that way.” this line was brilliant. Many would have thought it to be irrelavant. But I believe this to be the crux of the whole essay. This was the clue to what comes in the latter part of essay. Brilliantly disguised, I should accept!! I don’t know if you will ever see your lollipop gal, But i am sure you have exposed “THE PERVERT” in each one of us! And the person who did it according to me is the “GREATEST PERVERT” I have ever known
KUDOS!!!
It was Nice Bhai…But who was that Debonair…that u saw in Railway Station??
@ U KNOW WHO I AM:
Oh ma god! I appreciate your valiant efforts for doing so much research in what was in your brain and what was in mine. You are the Jack and Jill of being a muffle headed dumb duck, wanna know how? Read the following…
1) I don’t know who you are as you have not let out your name, according to the grapevine you spilt on the name field in the comment section.
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2) I swear I don’t know how pervasive you were/are while you boldly admitted that you had a perverted mind while reading my post.
3) And you claim as if I have remoulded the pervert facade of yours. A pervert by existence thinks as what he/she is.
4) Do not use ‘our minds’ as only your mind has reached the doorsteps of perverts’ asylum. And not other readers mind. I guess you are innately craving for support from others by using ‘our’.
5) [Brilliantly disguised, I should accept!! I don’t know if you will ever see your lollipop gal, But i am sure you have exposed “THE PERVERT” in each one of us! And the person who did it according to me is the “GREATEST PERVERT” I have ever known
Wow! Did I expose the pervert? You said you were a pervert and I didn’t expose you, but if you say so it’s cool. As said you are an anonymous to me still now. I don’t know whether you are a pervert or lesbian or masochist or gigolo. I don’t even know your gender you stupid.
And for the last line you wrote after a spectacular assessment of yours is that you still don’t know what a pervert means. Lol…
Woah! That was a big comment
“I swear I don’t know how pervasive you were/are while you boldly admitted that you had a perverted mind while reading my post.”
How pervasive I was/am??? That line was quite disappointing. A guy like you, who is thorough, methodical and one who checks and rechecks for errors, making an error is quite a painful sight!! Perhaps my comment was pervasive in your mind and might have been a reason for this rare slip, we’ll never know nor will our mind accept
And you claim as if I have remoulded the pervert facade of yours. A pervert by existence thinks as what he/she is.
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Did I ever say you remoulded my pervert facade?? I never claimed that or said anything about remoulding/moudling anything about anyone’s perversive(Please note the spelling for future usage) facade. Exposing and remoulding are two different things buddy.[Oh my God, what's happening??!!!, two errors in the first 3 points - one pertaining to vocabulary and one pertaining to context. That's not what people expect from Virtualveeran
“Do not use ‘our minds’ as only your mind has reached the doorsteps of perverts’ asylum. And not other readers mind.”
” I appreciate your valiant efforts for doing so much research in what was in your brain and what was in mine”
I reciprocate your appreciation – For your valiant efforts in doing a similar kind of research.
“Wow! Did I expose the pervert? You said you were a pervert and I didn’t expose you, but if you say so it’s cool.”
What do you intend to convey?? Especially “I didn’t expose you”. You mean to say that – It was cool that you exposed me – A pervert, something which i accepted. If that was the sense I see no sense in “I didn’t expose you” part. Is it yet another slip?? If you had intended something else, please do let me know.
“As said you are an anonymous to me still now. I don’t know whether you are a pervert or lesbian or masochist or gigolo. I don’t even know your gender you stupid.
And for the last line you wrote after a spectacular assessment of yours is that you still don’t know what a pervert means. Lol…”
anonymous – Ha Ha. You still can’t guess who I am?? Maybe by the end of this comment you might get an idea
After reading this line – “I don’t know whether you are a pervert or lesbian or masochist or gigolo.”
I have all reasons to believe that my spectacular assessment is indeed true. See who’s asking me if I know what a pervert means….???
P.S: In reply to this comment, you might start of with a few appreciative words like “muffle headed dumb duck” and then continue by saying something about me pointing out the errors made by you – add a few more appreciative phrases in that part, and continue with how incapable I am in doing that blah blah blah. You may also check this comment(or the previous comment) thoroughly for any mistakes I made, in order to get even. That would be something on expected lines and I doubt if your next comment surprises me without those parts
If an error is pointed out I would do my best to correct them in future, but my comment to your comment will not be based on those parts(inclusive of the appreciative words used by you). If there is something else i missed out to answer in this comment, do let me know. Will try my best to answer them for MY DEAR FRIEND
@ U STILL KNOW WHO I AM
1) As far as the mistakes in the comment section are concerned…
So be it.
2) Am letting you know what i intended to say…
In the initial comment of yours you have said… “thanks to our perverted minds”. This directly says that i didn’t expose you. And i did claim the same in my comment to yours.
In the initial comment of yours you have also said “But i am sure you have exposed “THE PERVERT” in each one of us!”
You said I have exposed you. I said if you say so it’s cool.
(What makes sense and what doesn’t make sense depends upon the beholder’s perception towards something.)
3) “I have all reasons to believe that my spectacular assessment is indeed true.”
Using a word or many words by knowing what it is doesn’t make a person a pervert as you claim.
4) “But i am sure you have exposed “THE PERVERT” in each one of us! And the person who did it according to me is the “GREATEST PERVERT” I have ever known.”
A person who exposed the pervert (as claimed by you) to the world is not a pervert, according to the definition of the word pervert. I don’t see any logic in declaring one as pervert when the declaration by itself is wrong.